I kinda like it so far mostly the dynamic between mc brother and father is really endearing especially since mc's father is bashful/aloof... one thing irked me tho Victor badmouthing mc's father in their presence regardless of the truth is not cool kinda made him loose some points in my book it's just my feeling I'm not asking to change anything you can totally ignore it.. nonetheless the other ROs seem really interesting.. I am interigued by Liv's past, phil's scary side and what hides behinds Noah's humor.. anyways awesome work here and can't wait for more ^^
Thank you so much for your comment!
I'm glad you liked the dynamic between the two Ravenstorms, that scene was so fun to write <D
I have big plans for the other ROs, probably too big for this project, and that's all I can say right now, because SPOILERS
As for Victor, he and Howard hadn't been on the best of terms since day one, not only because Vic came out, but because he was very hot-headed and rebellious. Victor used to be a bad influence on both Bash and Raven, and still struggles to keep this side of him away, but some days he can be difficult like that. I expected that to be the first reaction to him though, so its completely alright! Character progression and all that stuff, haha
Thank you, again :)