Good story overall but I wish we had more time to flesh out the characters and their personalities. Also would have loved to learn more about this world and how it's society works to give us a better perspective on Mercredi's mindset and her view of society. Also I'm a little disappointed that nothing seemed to happen with Oriel and Noir, it felt like they were being built up to have a role in Mercredi's downfall but they just get dropped from the story and we don't get even a mention of what became of them in the ending.
Side note: if you ever make another VN and I totally think you should, make it a sequel to this one and call it "A Sheep In Wolves' Clothing". As for what it could be about, well it could involve a pair of characters from this story's ending who wanted to become police officers. And the two of them investigate a murder involving another hybrid teenager whose guilt is in question. Just a suggestion you totally don't have to of course.