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Just played the new Tom' route and it was very amusing :D

I liked the changes you made, it made me laugh a lot haha. Besides, I'm kinda curious to see how it develops...

Loved the new arts <3 and glad u already have plans on doing a gallery for them hehe

They'r so expressive haha and the BGs are pretty awesome too!

Besides the one's that the MC is with his head down... those look WEIRD AS HELL '-'

The paiting/photo on the living room does weird me out tho LOL

Waiting for more! xP

*SPOILERS*

Ooh, just something, the shower scene involving Maccon and the dude I forgot the name was a bit eh weird... forced I think? 

Like the story was flowing okay, then that popped out of nowhere and kinda had no congruence at all...it would make much more sense if it was just Tom playing along with what *lousy* suggestions John may made to him (as implied by his dialogues after), without Maccon and the other dude being invoved.

Besides, u need a new BG for the showers LOL the "private" one is exactly a publich shower... and again, regarding the "forced story", the fck is a random dude doing on the owner's (of the gym) private shower?

It's still weird Tom showing there, as I presume a private shower is like, one stall with only one showerhead, but okay, "passable" - maybe that shower has 2 stalls or something like that? - , moreso considering that Maccon may be doing him a favor - as Tom did talk about the MC to him -, but damn, the FCK those other 2 "extras" do there? hahaha

Hope I was clear enough LOL my English sucks.

Also, their dicks are WEIRD AS FCK when hard LOL

They look okay soft, but seems like a "skin-colored" murshoom - acoording to the OCs skin color.

And the ghost thing was hillarous and weird ;P and yeah, I did finally felt the horror tag with those eyes looking at my soul LOL

Found some typos:

sensation*

hospital*

Oh, and regarding the art, something is pretty weird here... like, in some CGs it seems like they're different OCs '-'

Maybe different artist or something like that - as the style is preeety different haha

In some they look the usual, in others Tom is just a bit different - art style I think - but in others the MC goes from hmm "regular 20s dude?" to looking like a twink '-' that was pretty WTF

Here Tom's a bit different, but as said, the style it was drawn is different too... 

Not much difference haha it's better to keep it consistent tho

Here they both look kinda different...moreso for Jayce - but I dunno if it was intended xP

The one MC seems like a twink

I believe BS is Bull crap… I do not know if I can type the word… sorry.