So. There are a handful of proofreading errors: "Julien" becomes "Fabien" at one point; I got the message about Mon emptying water into a bowl of noodles three times.
I'm pointing out these nitpicks because I hate the idea that there's even the tiniest thing wrong with the story, because it's good. Like, really good. Kept-me-turning-virtual-pages good. Well-drawn characters (heck, I was starting to grow fond of the DJ by the end), very real setting, compelling story. If this is your first solo game, I am dying to read the next one. (Well, I mean, not like Lacey-dying. But still.)