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This visual novel was great! I can definitely see the CHARON inspiration. Here's the first part of my playthrough for anyone interested (Ichigo just has some strawberry jam on his face in the thumbnail, don't worry about it):

The UI design is competent, the artstyle looks good, and while I had a few issues with the grammar (but only because I'm annoyingly pedantic) the writing hit the right parts for me. Though the themes might not be for everyone, I'm very biased in that I love these types of stories.

My only gripes would be that I felt one of the endings was too "nice" for the protagonist and the way Yuzuki's backstory was told didn't feel like it fit with the rest of the pacing in the game, but these are just my opinions.

Otherwise, Sweetest Valentine was an enjoyable experience and I wish the developer all the best for their potential next project!

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I know the grammar is still faulty here and there since english isn't really my first language, but I'll keep trying to improve on it! I'm glad you still enjoyed the writing though!

I haven't watch the video yet (but you might see me in the comment section later), but I feel like I know which ending you're referring to (I'm assuming it's the good end), and I totally understand. As long as Ichigo's there, MC will continue having a great time as those two will keep on excusing and justifying each other's actions.

About Yuzuki's background though, yeah I have no excuse for that LMAO. Yuzuki's route as a whole is something that I struggle writing, so it's understandable if you find aspects of it lacking.

Once again, thank you for playing and I'm happy you enjoyed the experience!! I'll make sure to keep these feedbacks in mind for my next project! Have a nice day :D