Damn. Hurry up and make the rest of this game! The story is pretty awesome so far, I'm interested in seeing where it's going. There's one typo at the very start, but that's pretty much it.
Aaaahh I spelled "gruelling" wrong... It didn't hit me until just now. Thanks for catching that!
I'm glad you liked the story. I was a little worried that a family based drama might be boring compared to a fantasy adventure or love story but I'm glad you didn't think so. :)