I liked the metroidvania elements you included in this version. Still some platforming issues which need to be smoothed out but there was some entertainment trying to control the janky robot, I guess that does play into the out of control theme.
A definite improvement from the original but there were still some things missing, like the punchline was delivered a bit better in the original and I feel like the level design was a bit cleaner.
I did like the broken robots piling up though, did a great job of emphasising the challenge of certain parts.