Well I had fun playing this, love the story line, the artwork is great!
I did point out some spelling errors and stuff but I guess since you're already working on fixing that now my input is obsolete, lol.
Also, I kinda had a little bit of trouble figuring out what to do, but I guess that's just cause I'm kinda stupid.
I like your use of color to make things stand out better against the black and white scenery.
Anyways, I can't wait to see more of this game and I really hope you enjoy the video!