I can quit making notes when wanted, but till others do I am enjoying seeing the improvements and how fast updates that come. Hit boxes for objects still a little off putting (main example the blanket fold on the bed acting like a platform where it seems more like it would be something to step up onto just by walking), but works much better with the changes made, it still has much better feel over all and especially not having to fight controls as with first release presented here.
I could see as branching to a nice puzzler or a platformer given how much more work you are wanting to put into it.
For a short little experience it seems like a project that can expanded on and improved, but as a first it is a good work in progress.
Will also ask: Is picking up the pencils part of the tutorial or is there something else?
Cheers and keep up the good work.