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For Hyao♡

Amazing game, I love the world building and the mechanism of brewing potions, plot and main quests but also the graphic and the character's sex appeal. I wanted only to suggest you a few little details and improvements that if it's possible to add inside the game, will surely improve it in my opinion: 

1) In later versions of the game could you consider implementing a sort of log that explains to players what kind of request you must complete to improve your relationship with that specific character, like the one for the main quests but that focuses only on a specific Romance with a character (Bernard, Logan, Blake...)

2) Adding defined icons to more objects, clothes and weapons but also enemies like hornets, vulture, murcads and create Pablo, Ever and Neva aspect would be so much better (Obviously is not something urgent but it is also something to not forget) 

3) Implementing a standard aspect for the player only as an early prototype to access a major variety for visual sex scenes between the player and the characters. Then in a very late version of the game test the possibility to customize the protagonist, and if it turns too difficult to handle then do not add it but atleast keeping a standard aspect for the player should help both  game's development and according to my opinion players' entertainment 

4) Implementing more visual scenes not only with the standard player but also between many other characters and I'd like to suggest you: 

Logan x Blake (In the basement after 18:00) 

Scrap x Ratkin (The Blowjob scene described when you encourage Scrap to behave like a normal ratkin)

Everett x Feliar (I would be so grateful to see a drunk  Everett having fun with that malicious satyr) 

Scrap x Tao (These 2 are the best ship of the game and they need both a relationship and a sexual scene!) 

Ste x Player (Like you did for Caleb you could implement another glory hole sex scene which I'd never complain about) 

Caleb and Scrap bath scene (they need to be implemented asap if it's possible) 

Caleb x Player x Bernard (The threesome that I'm sure everyone is looking for, with two versions a bottom Caleb one and a top Player and a Caleb top one with the Player dobble penetrated by those two hunky werewolves) 

Arion x Hayden x Player (Another hot threesome that could be of 2 types depending on player's decision of completing Arion's request) 

5) Just like a Pokèdex, having a page with a little description of enemies could help a lot new players to enjoy more this masterpiece, but not only a description of the enemy itself is necessary, I think that having also a guide that tells you how to behave with enemies to increase their attitude towards you would be a blessing. Of course players will not discover enemies' weak point at the first encounter, they'll have to seduce them totally if they want to fuck with them, or throughout subquests, defeat them, to acknowledge both the best strategy and weapons to use against the enemies and how to sexually deal with them.

6) Adding  background to places that lack of them like Fishing Village, Farmland, Northcest, ecc... (Obviously also this is not urgent but it isn't something to leave behind)

Thank you for letting me your attention and forgive me if I asked something that you've already discussed with other, it's the first time that I try to contact you so I still don't know much about this game's community so my bad if I said something wrong or if I was repetitive, also excuse me for my bad english but I'm not english so I tried my best at writing and expressing in the best way I could

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Well Hyao did mention that all sexy eventful scenes will get CG art when the MC is not involved, it will be difficult to implement your character in it because everyone is imagening the MC differently...

Also the art is not done by Hyao but by multiple others, and most character designs are done by ZoroJ. Hyao will prolly add them in as soon Zoroj has time for it. Same rule goes for the artists who creates the icons, backgrounds and the soundtrack.

I do agree with your statements about a list for what you need to do to unlock hearts in your relationship list, it fills the empty space. A Pokedex-like system doesn't sound like a bad idea though actually.

What I also would like for Hyao to add is (but probably will happen in the future I guess) to add more scene locations in towns/camps/cities. Like for example see Bernard's shop from the outside and inside. Another thing I would like is ambience sound which we can turn on or off, the forest had it but it's replaced by music.

And don't worry your English is fine :)

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Some MC sex scenes could work I think. A good way to implement that is a POV shot. Like for example: sucking Gunnar, the artist could show a camera angle looking up at Gunnar with his dick out. Perhaps the artist could also add a semi transparent mouth/head or hand on the dick. I saw a similar art like this at Hyao's twitter where some translucent hands were groping Logan. That style of MC CG's has potential I think. I also thought of this after discovering POV porn recently lol. I didn't know those existed.

This wouldn't work on threesomes though. But the scene with Korg/Player/Ste could still work since Korg and Ste are sitting side by side. Two translucent hands, jerking them off while the two flex with each other could work as a CG. 

This is just me though but I hope we won't see anything of the MC, even if it were transparent floating hands or tongues.. It just brings me out of the moment actually.

The pov, and only that, might work but indeed not in all cases.

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- A lot of those points are about the graphic. I'm getting as much of art as I can. Artist I'm working with have their own lives and their own projects. They can only do that much during one month. All enemies will have sprites, all places will have backgrounds, new icons are added every month. Making those assets require a lot of time and effort, I'm trying not to hustle people I work with. 
- Character log is already implemented. I just didn't have time to fill it. There's an example what it's going to look with Bernard's two quests. It's just another time consuming thing that would require quite a lot of time from me, which would mean less time for doing content. So for now I just left it for later. 
- 'Pokedex' thing. That's another thing that is already in game. Just not exactly updated for the same reason as the one above. But when I find some time to work on it, I'll update the information.