Heyo! ^^, always love reading xour new updates, Heat Source is soops cute~! :3
I'd like to make a suggestion regarding the part where the MC and Angel are walking to his room, if xou don't mind?
LP's aren't normally pro "pick me up", actually, it really annoys them. However! Mar is the "Shelter me" type and all about being manhandled :p sooo might I suggest that xou at least acknowledge most little people don't like being picked up? Xou could say something like:
"I know most dwarves don't like being babied, but I could really get used to Angel fawning over me all the time~"
Just a suggestion! ^_^" keep doing what xou're doing because we love it~ n_n/