A surprisingly good visual novel. Nice work. Hope your affairs are in order and the writing process is smooth.
I think my only complaints are regarding some of the word choice... "going ham" for instance....yes I can tell this was written by a zoomer. You could of used going wild, crazy, all out, I dunno, the english lexicon is huge, instances where you use very modern grammar is just... it takes me out of the world and reminds me this is a furry novel....
Ah well, could be worse, you didn't have a character saying lol at least...