I went through and touched up the English. I cross-referenced the Japanese file to make sure everything was accurate and authentic. It's more consistent and sounds much more natural now. I think I did a good job, if I do say so myself.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uipf4LkY02VQiOKqXzP_MU-VykqCls_l/view?usp=shari...
Everything I mentioned before has already been fixed. That is incredible! Great work, Mofu. It feels very polished!
One thing: I feel like the new boss is very easy compared to the rest. I could take 4 or 5 hits from the mushroom boss, but I can take more than 10 here. I think the mechanics of the fight are great, but there's no incentive to engage with those mechanics if I can just tank the damage and trade hits. With the control improvements you've done, you can definitely expect the player to be able to handle it. I never felt like I took an unfair hit, because the controls are excellent.
I would suggest much higher damage and slightly less HP. I mean, she's a giant wielding a hammer bigger than Nene. High damage would definitely make sense.
Oh, and if you hold a direction during Nene's fall damage animation, her face will stay that way until you let go of it. It's pretty funny, to be honest.
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Thank you so much for the very excellent translation!🥰💕 I have downloaded it and then added it to the new update!
Yes, I would like to make the new boss have more damage of the attacks. And since there are no special controls in this battle, I'd like to consider adding such things. Thank you for the helpful advice!🤗