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Hi, I don't want to sound critical because I love this game. I went back to the beginning and started it again, without touching the new update.  The one thing I really noticed, and again I don't want to sound critical or sound like I am insulting your work because I love it. I don't know if you actually have a proof reader or not but there is a lot grammatical issues. For example 'will you bring me home' when it should be 'will you take me home.' Usage of the word 'that' instead of 'this'. There are many little examples of wrong word use, or wrong sentence structure. This only applies to MNF. MNM there are no problems at all with anything. I am wondering if you plan to release an update sometime in the future in which you will fix the above in MNF? I know your very busy, and honestly if you don't that is perfectly fine too, but since you have worked so long and so hard on the game itself, it would be a shame not to revisit it and fix the grammar issues that are non existent in MNM, it would add that extra level of shine to the game. Please don't take this comment the wrong way, I really do love MNF and was my first avn. I have played a lot of other avn's but MNF is on a completely different level entirely and I know MNM will also be just as awesome.