I enjoyed the writing. The clippy reference was funny! One issue, however, is that when it wraps to multiple lines, the text begins to move which is visually unappealing. A way to skip through the text more quickly would also be nice. Using dialog to give instructions ("How do I move, again?") was a clever detail.
Why was the bridge purple/pink? It stood out so I spent a lot of time trying to interact with it, to no avail. Edit: figured it out with the 2nd one, perhaps don't skin the first one that color?
Art is great, very smart way to create depth and scenes without excessive detail. I loved the concept of the panning camera, though a few pans were a bit too quick/far and were unpleasant to watch.
Controls feel fine. I enjoyed the shift button supercharge mechanic. It was an excellent addition - simple to use, yet provided significant gameplay change.
Overall, really liked it!