Hello friend. Your game cutscene is very beautiful. It's pretty sad. I think you should definitely explore that emotion more. It was good. What I think you should have improved is in the mapping because the mountain has all the same measurements and a mountain doesn't have this egalitarian shape on the sides. It is very irregular in its edges. And I would recommend adding more weeds, leaves, flowers, since it is a region with a lot of grass, and where there is a lot of grass, there is life, and where there is life, there are other species of plants. If in doubt, study landscape photos. That's a good one. And I wish you good luck, my friend. See you on the podium.
Hi there!!
Thank you so much for the feedback! And I definitely like to write/think using that kind of emotions ^^
Yeah I'm totally aware that the mountain map is not good. Unfortunately I was under a deadline and I did not have the time to improve it. :(
It makes me sad, because I know that detail would improve much more on the scene.
I will try improve it after the contest is over!
Thank you so much for your kind words ^^