Adding my review for the visual novel here, interesting that the reviews are not public by default on this website.
Muy agradable arte y ambientación.
Me gusta el concepto general.
Los finales alternativos se sienten algo forzados, o que nos falta una explicación más detallada de por qué los personajes actúan de esa manera; quedan cabos sueltos.
Los personajes son interesantes, sería bueno que tengan más desarrollo.
La versión en Inglés tiene algunos problemitas debido a que el autor aún parece estar aprendiendo el idioma, pero en ningún momento se vuelve tan mala como para no entender lo que se quiere transmitir, no le quita disfrute a la obra.
En general, muy recomendada! Lo disfruté mucho. Debido a los cabos sueltos y a los interesantes personajes y concepto, me gustaría mucho una secuela! 4/5
English review: Very nice art and ambience.
I like the general concept.
The alternate endings feel somewhat forced, or that we're missing a more detailed explanation of why the characters act the way they do; there are loose ends.
The characters are interesting, It'd be nice if they had more development.
The English version has some slight problems because the author seems to be learning the language still, but at no point it becomes so bad that you can't understand what it's trying to convey, it doesn't detract from the enjoyment of the work.
Overall, highly recommended! I enjoyed this a lot. Due to the loose ends and interesting characters and concept, I would very much like a sequel! 4/5
Thanks for your review!
I am quite aware of the errors after reading some more reviews, and I keep them in mind so that in a possible sequel, as well as in future projects, I can improve in all those aspects. (Character development, translation, longer and better endings, etc.)
I really appreciate your opinion and I hope to do better with time.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks!