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Wow! Didn't expect you to respond! 

Hotel Upgrades - Perhaps a third floor for actual guests that way the player can actually have a "hotel" to run. Nothing really visual, but perhaps more an additional floor to house more guests, and there could be maybe a mini game of having Lin, Sylvia, or Android trying to deliver food to them on time or perhaps something else related to hotels (perhaps getting them a room within a set amount of time)

More staff - Perhaps have the player look into hiring an additional cook to cook food for the bar (The player would have the choice to have Lin cook the food or hire a cook for the bar (Having Lin cook would be a double-edged sword as if the patron doesn't like her cooking, it might hurt the hotel's reviews, but on the other hand a cook requires a salary and can be expensive for the almost gaurenteed high quality food)

As for the rest, I get the story is pretty linear, but sometimes the character interactions feel weird (Autumn in particular feels awkward considering her attitudes towards elves). I feel like it be interesting to have the player (on a linear path) have to balance the various personalities of the characters.

Thanks for the feedback! I've never had a dev respond to my input! 

To the Hotel Upgrades, I think I've got something. In an earlier post, I've mentioned that the game needs a money sink, and I've said a server room with purchased coolant would be good, as it would help Kali. However, that would also help Android, and now that I think about it, there is a LOT of things that it could expand into.

1) It could help Kali, as designing robotics is always easier with more processing power.

2) Android could use it, because she needs a lot of computing power, explained in her story.

3) Lin could use it, it could help the Owl Clan by interfering with the long distance comms of the soldiers that try to bully them, it would be possible to remotely check on the robots defending them.

4) Lucia could use it, perhaps her story could develop towards her being good with hardware stuff, so this could become her domain.