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Also, "It's a mandatory meeting after all" in 3.20 got repeated. Also I think there should be a space after the sentence in which you run a hand through your hair in the same chapter? Ugh, so sorry that all I have are bugs and not enough compliments. I'm too involved right now to think of good compliments.

Another bug report; I chose to read Blane's report, and afterwards I could choose to read it again. The game disappeared Arden's report instead.

5.09, "You know, if it wasn't forRapture and my generousity,"

I have realized that my character is basically Blane except less competitive. Which makes a surprisingly mellow character.

5.31r, Thai isn't capitalized.

...I'm so sorry for all my comments. Like, this all just looks so negative. Eugh. I love this story so much, and I'm not even saying anything! Rylan my beloved...

I think every option in 5.42 acts as though you've chosen the first option?

Hunter stats says "You have obsidian black chest length hair, which is na." Dunno what that means.

"Sway side to side" as a dance option has a > at the end.

Alright, read back up to where I was, and it's just as absolutely delicious as I remember. Ugh. So good. You're a fantastic writer.