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With "cold" I mean the colors and the design. I'm not a graphic-expert, so it just felt a bit lifeless to me, but also isn't "cool". Warmer colors might help. The clouds could also be animated to make them more feel like fluffy, non-static things. 

Regarding the backstory: that's good that you already work on that! :)