I like it so far, art is fine, the story not groundbreaking but still a good read - keep up the good work!
After playing it some time I have two major feedback points:
- I _always_ forget what the spells exactly do. Please give me a way to reread the spell descriptions in combat :)
- The spelling makes it often hard to follow the plot. Have you ever tried to export the dialog (should be an option in Renpy's SDK) and opened it with Word/Grammerly/whatever to run a spell checker?