Hey, I just finished your game and I enjoyed it. Thanks for the opportunity. Below I have listed my thoughts about your game. I hope you can find it to good use.
The good stuff:
- Voice acting is always a big plus in a game. I especially liked the “demonic” voice.
- The ambience audio was of a good quality and same goes for the sound effects. Likewise it made the game even more scary and believable.
- Great story and narrating
- Graphics looked amazing!
- I really liked that rifle. I would have enjoyed having a secondary weapon too and some more enemies to kill.
- The game intro was well made. Thumbs up!
Missing features / Glitches:
- Missing a run feature (Same goes for jump, but less important)
- About the UI
- There was a little grammar mistake in the “Game Paused”
- The game menu buttons clicking audio seemed too loud.
- The options feature after the game was launched, wasn’t available.
- After coming to a new area / checkpoint the player had to press any key. If I clicked the mouse at that moment, it accidentally fired a shot from the rifle behind the UI. So I quickly learned not to do that.
- The zombies were broken. You couldn’t outrun them when they first spotted you.
- Too many invisible colliders. I ran into them everywhere and it was really annoying. I know you want to keep the player on the right track, but there are several other ways you can do that. You can instead add large rocks / cliffs / hills / rivers /dense trees etc.
- Missing a way to disable the “Headbob” feature. Personally, I don’t mind headbob, but I know some people hate it, and they can get uncomfortable playing with it over time. I just recently learned that myself and therefore I added the feature into my own game.
- The rifle is clipping through walls. There’s a way to fix this. You need to add an extra camera only to render the weapon and set it to “Depth only”
- I’m not a big fan of the sound of a beating heart for a longer period of time. This is just my personal opinion.
- I easily got lost from time to time. You should add a compass. It’s pretty easy to make.