Story 4/5 - There is only so much and it's quick, but what I did see was well put together
Sound 4/5 - Great atmosphere and soundscape. Nothing that stood out, but as a cohesive soundtrack and effects it really worked
Gameplay 4/5 - Nothing was really complicated, or any full mechanics. It ran incredibly linear, but in this aspect it was to tell a story and with this it did it well.
Design 4/5 - There were a few graphical glitches, and a few parts I was trying to understand on the design of the farm itself. But the environment you created helped the foreboding atmosphere, and the creature design was very well done. I enjoyed that you kept the creature out of view of sight for most of the game, so it built up mystery behind it and the disappearances.
Overall 4/5 - The parts I truly enjoyed were small parts. The creature just waiting by the door. Didn't move, but was there foreboding, and I especially loved when it grabbed her. That I don't see in horror games very often, as most things happen off screen. So that was just a chef's kiss to add.
I plan on visiting your other stuff, as I like what you've made so far. Really recommend this anyone playing.