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Firstly, I like the game and bought it on steam. But it does feel a little like it's written by someone with ADHD. The script is a big long series of and then scenes. It introduces bad guys and kills them off, someone's upset then horny then you are on holiday then an assassination attempt.. etc etc.. I wish it spent more time on each scene and had a little more depth of character.

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You may enjoy A Petal Among Thorns a bit more. It's my second completed work, and it's paced a bit better. Also it's more down to earth.

Thanks, like I say I bought the game, so I hope my criticisms didn't come across as too harsh. I do like it and parts of it did make me chuckle. My issue was purely about the flow and and depth of the dialogue. I'll try PAT