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That would be awesome! As it stands the majority of the text is readable from the get-go so just let me know if you find any weird grammar :)

Got it. Lemme do a quick playthrough 

I'd say "We know that most of you are illiterate" on the first page first chapter.

I'd remove "harsh" from "harsh reality".

Capitalize The Institute for Chest Standardization as shown. 

golden *chests not chest on that fourth page first chapter.

"for gold coins and other treasure, and of course (etc). Add that comma.


Page 5: "fill them or don't."


"gold chests must always be filled with gold."


"and if you don't have any gold, melt the chest down, idiot".


"If you ever encounter a chest that does not match these qualifications"


"He uses an unknown red metal"


I'll do other chapters later

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That's so cool! Thank you! Can you shoot me an email? Itch doesn't have private messaging yet haha

contact@quatsch-games.com (Yes, I have bought the domain just for this)