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Thank you so much !! It means a lot for me <3

I will try to rewritte the script with the help of Grammarly.

I will improve my writing for my future visual novels!

No worries! <3

I'm glad you're okay with me giving some advice. If you do rewrite it I will be sure to read it again. :D

I'm sure you will improve! You're a really good storyteller and I look forward to your future visual novels. :)

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I always open to good advice :D

And thank you again !