I really enjoyed this story. It took a few unexpected turns and I love how when you choose particular options it changes the whole mood of your character, you also found a way to personalize who you're playing which is a really cool effect. I feel the writing could've been touched up a bit, it felt a little clunky to read at times. However, overall the story felt unique and the art was very cute and well done, I especially like how you built the inside of her cafe. Great job on this. I hope to see more!