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The game has potential, it is overall good

However my complain is that the narration is confusing as it keeps switching back and forth from 1st person view to 2nd person view and so on. The grammar seems a lil off so I would suggest get some proofreaders.

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Thanks for the input! Trying my best as an 1-man team and not a native speaker. :D

If you find any grammar, spelling mistake, typos or POV errors, please report where and I will fix it.

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Love the game! Very nice direction you're headed in! I'll highlight corrected edits for you if you want to send me the text. :) I missed my calling as an editor I think, but have actually edited a few novels for a friend of mine in my spare time lol