This is a cool little deep dive into your existential angst, an angst that can be quite relatable IMO. I believe existential horror is a relatively untapped market, and I think you handle the subject really well. I hope you're not too tired of listening to people read your story because I've gone ahead and read it as well. (:
BTW, I noticed this was published in 2016. I hope you're still working on new stuff and if you aren't, I hope you do! haha
Thanks for making games!