5.19d in scripts/dailyevents
After brief talk you realize that the young a brief talk
You spend couple of hours going through mansion's yard a couple // the mansion's yard
After it's over $name addresses to you. adresses you.
After spending some time exploring each other bodies each other's bodies
By the end of a date you have grown closer. of the date
You and $name spend some time having a pleasant conversion. conversation
you drag $name to the private room spending rest of the morning to a private room (more than 1 in the mansion)// the rest of the morning
and give $him long lustful kiss a long
You decide to keep eye on $him an eye
$he announce you that $he brought announces (or tells you)
You send $child to the city to try find $his relatives. to try finding or to try to find
at the brothel for last few days. for the last few days
he offers you hefty sum of gold a hefty sum
and ask $him if he wishes to leave your estate if $he wishes
and provide $him with miscarriage potion. with a
$He asks you to give $him couple of days away a couple of days
does not offer any visible hostility. suggest: does not show any visible hostility.
does not deserve any rest in first place in the first place
visited by an unknown man, who appears to be a fairly well-known official either he's famous or not, I suggest "visited by a fairly well-known official" instead
and proclaims that your person, $name that your slave
He demands compensation and your person to be properly disciplined. your slave
As official leaves you wondering how badly it gonna hurt your reputation As the official // you wonder how // it's gonna hurt
punish $him, but it is in his best interest in $his best
yesterday and according to few witnesses, to a few
and with help of Mage's Order you find $name with help from the Mage's order (or with the help of )
appointed headgirl, deciding $he should be able to take care of it. By the end of the day " missing end of sentence
pretty piece of jewelry possessed by strange trader by a strange
$he can take it easy for few days until for a few days
couldn't find much food in past few days. in the past few (or in the last few days)
being wooed over by few male teenagers. by a few
tell $name that you demand $him responds to $his admirers you demand $he responds (or you demand $him to respond)
life very complicated to the point, $2he's ready to became a slave very complicated, to the point // ready to become
You reject the $2child's offer telling that your current situation saying that (or telling $him that)
valuable pieces of clutter you have at your mansion. As you inspect it, apparently nothing really important was damaged, "clutter" doesn't sound precious, I suggest replacing with " valuable item" , " valuable piece of furniture" or something like that.
As $he quickly gets wetter what if it's a boy ? I recommend "gets aroused" instead
you decide to drop whole issue the whole issue