I love text adventures, but this one needs lots of improvement.
- The main text box had good contrast, but the choices at the bottom did not. A blue capital letter is very hard to see clearly against a dark grey background. I highly recommend this website that helps you pick the colors with the greatest contrast.
- Lots of empty space on the main text block.
- Hard to visualize where the character is in relation to the environment. Some sort of graphics or at the very least more descriptive narratives would have helped here.
- No sound effects or graphics.
- It wasn't very clear to me what the goal was.
- The inventory system and stat screen were nice additions.
- Being able to click on options with the mouse was a nice touch.
Overall I'd give this 2/5.