Tone was funny, I enjoyed this one a lot. I'm a fan of detective fiction, so that was a big helper too. Pretty mad he didn't give me a sandwich though. Driving was a bit stiff but serviceable. Excellent work!
Thank you! It makes us happy that you enjoyed it! I hope the detectiveness lived up to your detective fiction expectations! Also, yeah. No sammich for you. If we do continue this, there just might be some kind of retribution for that. ;D
