I quite enjoyed reading this one. The situation of a scavengers searching ghost ships after a battle offers a lot for tense scenes (especially in a setting where Daemons prowl) and the sudden build up of imagery with the reflecting eye lenses worked quite well. Plus, I admit to having a good chuckle with the password attempts.
Whilst everything at the end was very sudden, that felt appropriate for the intended tone plus with the aimed word count, there is only so much that could be done to foreshadow. I would have liked a tad more to explore the environment they were in, location and tone is oh so effective when foreshadowing a sudden horror ending. Beyond that however, loved it. :)