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I think this story could use a little more clarity, both in the dialogue between the two smugglers, and in their final fate. I know it was intended to be a shock reveal, but I'm not sure what was revealed. I would have appreciated one or two more clues to that effect. Overall though this was a well-done horror story.

Thanks for the advice !! Tbh I was really into the whole corrupted machine cult stuff I kind of lost track of remembering to introduce it, as it is a rather unknown faction, Whoops :P