I have some useful feedback for you to help improve this V.N. even more so far i am loving, the first 1 is when the MC goes out on the boat and end up going in the sea and as you should know water and electrical item have a shocking time in water, but i found wield is you never use that before he gets on the boat and is the brace water proof because in the story so far it ends up in the sea *( TWICE )* once thanks to the whale and second is when *( stormy )* drops you of at night, but the other i found so funny is the use of " MAGIC ethernet ports" as in the screen caps below. thanks keep up the great work on this V.N. Chapter 2 v0.2.1 cant wait to see where it goes and the next Chapter 3.
