Time for my obligatory sudo-review for your game.
The amount of inspiration is obvious, but because you are trying to put your own personal spin on the Yume-Nikki formula, I'm giving it a pass.
The areas where varied and looked very nice, but not having an option to lower the sound effects is slightly annoying.
I will have to admit that I suck at playing these types of games, but what I did experience was nice.