I enjoyed the game but it would have been helpful in certain puzzle areas to know what you're doing as it was at first confusing. Also you may want to edit out the copyrighted music clip Charmaine as currently you cannot claim full creatorship for your game or perhaps won't be able to gain money for it either also folks on youtube can't gain any money either from ads playing due to this copyrighted music that you added. Just a heads up.
But otherwise you've created a very interesting game that reads like a novel that transported me to the hard, gritty land and time of the era. And I began to really feel for Loretta and wanted her life to be better and I am happy to see that we have choices to change the course. I love how you also brought in a bit of horror fantasy to the game also. This is story I can't wait for you to finish!