in startslavequest :
$He watches you with a hint of worry in his gaze in $his gaze
supplies are left from your journey, to put together dinner. suggest "to put some dinner together" instead
home any more. $he’s free to try to return $He's free
that $he probably won’t an easy journey, travelling alone. won't have an
WIthout saying another word, Without
but you have something very important business to attend to some very (3 times)
$He blushes as he trails off, as $he trails
oblige $him if he ever wants another massage if $he ever (2 times)
having $his $2sibling rest atop him like that rest atop $him
$name lays down on his stomach, and tells you on $his stomach
as you work at a particularly tense muscle. work on a
Feeling the press of her erection against your hip as he embraces of his erection
lower his underwear, however, a groan escapes her lips his lips
penis twitch against the contraining fabric constraining
erect shaft as she thinks of your commanding gaze as he thinks
he thinks of how you’ve strained yourself to help her. He begins to help him.
as she thinks off all of the things she wants thinks of (or thinks about)
shaft as he thinks off all of the things he same
pictures your hand in the place of his, masturabting him masturbating
moan as her silken folds envelope your erect penis envelop (verb, not the object)
As you feel him growing close, his cock beginning to twitch begins to twitch (or: You feel him growing)
and both of your cry out as he fills you with his seed. both of you cry out
quickly realize that you’re tied to the corners of bed. of the bed. (3 times)
gather your clothes, and escape to your own rooms. own room. (4 times)
leaves you alone, smiling to himself he walks away. as he walks
trying to turn your head away from pussy, from her pussy
the pleasure shivering through your body despite your desire. not despite, because of. or maybe despite the situation instead.
on you as his cock betweens to twitch in your hand begins to twitch
as you walk back you your own rooms. to your own room
also on my previous post you missed disgust and overwhelmed, I forgot to put // to indicate 2 changes :
watches your actions with digust, overwhelemed by the situation
Nice update ! :)