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...This is the second "fully M/M" game I've seen with a straight protagonist. What is that about? Who is this for? Who would want that?

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He's not straight. He's figuring himself out, in self-denial, going through gay guilt. A lot of gays feel like this growing up, I certainly did. So his narration is going to reflect said denial.

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Uh... how old is the MC? If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out...

This is absolutely not relatable to me whatsoever... to the point that I could not even imagine the possibility of it and just assumed he is straight... So, in any case, this game is definitely not for me. Can't put myself in the MC's shoes because I cannot comprehend whatever he's feeling.

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That's ok. Not every game is for everyone.

MC is based on me and a ton of people had that same experience.

Also, have you met closeted gay men? A gazillion of them are over 18, a lot of them middle aged and even (unhappily) married to women.

Maybe try to use empathy to see other points of view instead of assuming every experience should be exactly like yours.

I'm glad you have it all figured out. A lot of us haven't.

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Uh yeah, plenty of gay men are in the closet... what does that have to do with anything?

How the fuck can I use empathy to see something I have no knowledge of? What the fuck? You are insane.

And yes, I definitely have it all figured out. Not hard when, you know, sexual attraction is an involuntary physical response that does not require figuring out. Literally all you need to do is not be paralyzed. But I dunno, maybe you are paralyzed.

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Wow, you're really toxic. I was questioning well into my 20's because what society was telling me I should feel as bi wasn't what I was feeling at all. Who are you to say how people should navigate this? Who are you to judge how others navigate this? 

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they don't mean you in particular for being unable to understand how the MC feels and how comfortable he is with his sexuality, everyone here is glad you have yourself figured out and we hope you stay in a situation where you can be yourself openly, but you are not every gay person. a lot of gay men and women don't realize they like the same gender until very late in life because of how they were raised or who raised them or who they were raised around. back when I was a minor I constantly thought that I knew nothing about myself because I was a minor and that what I was interested in might change when I grew up and or I might be straighter than a needle, spoiler alert, I never did, and also on the main topic about why most M/M games have "straight" MC is so it can relatable to those who still don't know themselves and wouldn't mind exploring via real life experience, or virtual ones. some games ignore it because it's not everyone, some games add it because it's not everyone. 

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What the heck man? 

It's really cool that you've got it all figured out and we're all seriously happy for you - and we support that! No one should feel guilty or scared because of their sexuality, but unfortunately so many of us still are, due to the way we grew up, things we were taught or people we were around. 

But what you wrote is so narrow-minded

"If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out", seriously? Do you believe that, like, by the age of 18, you gotta have yourself figured out? That's so wrong, because 18 is so young and you're basically just starting to explore life freely. Like, I believed I was asexual until not so long ago and it took me so much time to accept that and to stop trying to force myself to change. Only to realize in my middle twenties that I'm, well, not so asexual. And I'm STILL not even sure where I fit exactly. 

You use empathy to put yourself - to imagine yourself - in another person's shoes and see things from their perspective. You don't have to have knowledge of something or experience it to be able to use empathy. 

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This game is amazing! The writing is absolutely phenomenal and I can't stop replaying and watching the different outcomes. Good luck with the game, I'll be looking forward for updates!  

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Agree, the writing is exceptional. Definitely a talent.

Oh, and thanks it's in present tense! E.g. Young Markus TOG is in past tense which often feels wrong.

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I think past tense works if everything is in past tense, because then it sounds like "a long time ago..." or "once upon a time..."  IMO the problem is when you mix tenses, then it's just confusing.

I'm a big fan of Young Marcus, I think both Randiel and Serialaries did a great job with it.

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Thanks for reading and for such great compliment. I really tried to add replay value in different outcomes, even though my story is very chronological, point A to point B, instead of open world.

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Is there a possible chance that Shane could be a love intrest? Cuz I kinda like him to be added than just a background character.

He won't. I already have 5 love interests to write and I can't add more otherwise the story will never develop. Shane is very much a part of the Haruki storyline, though.

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Coolest game ever.

The characters are so complex and unexpected. Haruki is incredible. Never was much into Asians. Now, I am. Was always into plain text porn. It gets you terribly hot, but this is even better. The wonderful pics of the MCs' faces are better than 1000 words, but also just enough. For the rest, fantasy does the better job. Tried text games with less pictures, but was missing something. Games with lots of pics are also nice, but this is better.

Can't wait for more content.

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Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked it. I try to be very descriptive so that images are not needed. I think erotica alone is more arousing than porn photos/gifs, if done right. I hope I'm doing it right 😅

Haruki best boi

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This Haruki/MC/Marky triangle is SO GOOD, if you go back to Marky's room after the Haruki movie date. 😍

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glad you liked it.

Marky's little outburst was fun to write.

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new update when?

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at least a couple of months

is it gonna be a big update?

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It will feature the Emmett and Tyler dates. Probably double the size of the last one.

Emmett was supposed to be released along with Haruki but I had writer's block at the time, not knowing what to do with him.

I'm not blocked anymore. I know what to do with Emmett. My life is just crazy right now, so barely any time for writing.

how do i get emmit to view me as a dom?

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Focus on him instead of jacking off the bullies and take the blue (dom) action whenever possible with Emmit. Don't surrender to either of the bullies, as well.

the most important choice is during chapter IV, in the bathroom, you have to Find A Way Out Yourself (blue choice)

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new update when

at least a couple of months

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Glad to see this working again,great

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YES I FINALLY GET TO BE DOMINANT

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Ngl, I know this is more for the kinky stuff, but I eat it up every crumb of """love""" that Marky gives to the mc. The part with Samuel was fun too, I know he problably it's not very popular but I think he's in my top 2 after Marky. 

I was wondering, will we get a scene with the principal?

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Marky loves MC in his own way. He just has a psychotic way of showing it UwU

And there'll be sex with the principal, yes. It'll take a little while though. Only after I finish all dates.

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Man i love samuel and haruki...

So you like the goodest boys instead of the evilest ones

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 i feel like haruki is a good boy on the outside but when nobody is around hes a bad boy + he can kick ass...and samuel just pulls me in lol. i dont know what he did. i love fully bad/evil boys like marky but something about those two.. 


My ranking right now would probably be:

1 - Haruki

2 -  Tyler 

3 -For now i'd say Marky only since he has way more content than Samuel

3.5 - Samuel

5. Emmett (no hard feelings)

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I can't wait for the next update , really looking forward to see what happens if I choose marky at the movies

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I'm excited to get there too. He's the one I love to write the most lol

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Just played the new update and ahhhh it's so good!!\(^-^)/ I loved the little interaction with Tyler when you tell him you're favorite movie,both the sub and dom route in Harukis date were a masterpiece and the scene with Marky after the date was *chefs kiss*UwU<3

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Thanks for the compliment!

I also loved writing the Marky scene at the end of Haruki's date. It's always fun to write that psycho.

Things are different if you picked Tyler before :0

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Bold of you to assume that I haven't replayed every single route 15 times already OwO

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So, I've just completed my first playthrough (as dom as I could manage) and I am in love. I get the feeling most of the content is sub/slut focused, so I appreciate the work and creativity that've been put into the top/bully storylines. Absolutely delicious.

Time to start up a slutty sub playthrough and eagerly await future updates.

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I'm also really looking forward to the Emmett movie date because I just love bullying that adorable nerd.

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The game does start leaning more towards sub content but the latest updates have a decent 50/50 mix of sub and dom content. I'd say from chapter IV forward.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it and also looking forward to the Emmett date.

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love this game.

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Brother, why did you rate the bloody basketball game one star???

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Brother, why did you rate the bloody basketball game one star???

Wen will the hext update xome out?

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I don't have a date to give, but I'm working on it. I don't like to give dates because every time I do, I miss the deadline.

OK thank you

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i love this game so much, the writing is fantastic.  this game just hits the spot with it's hot characters and in depth story (kinks I'm into)😉  I really can't wait for more updates, hopefully with more Marky content🥵🥵

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Thank you for the compliment ♥ More Marky is for sure coming. 

I don't know exactly when the next update is coming. I'm a bit stuck with a certain scene.

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This game is wonderful! All the characters are so memorable, especially Marky and Haruki, I'm a pretty big fan of them ;). Anyways, I love the writing, and can't wait to see where this game goes in further updates!

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thanks! I'm so glad you like my characters. my effort at characterization is coming through haha


the next update is 65% done I'd say. 

tiny spoiler: it's movie night at St. Agnes

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I Love this game so  much! The Story has barely even really started and is already one of my favourites. Marky stayed in my head so long after I was aleady done playing. Super hot game, lovely writing and storytelling. The discord link doesnt work btw. Id offer myself up as a beta reader but judging by the comments on here theres already enough lol. Plese continue working on this, u are so talented <3

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Thanks for the high praise!

Marky is my favorite character, I understand your obsession with him hahaha

It's so cool knowing others like something I made.

As for the discord link, it only lasts 7 days for some reason. So here it is again: 

https://discord.gg/nYuy8hhW

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Thanks I joined! Marky is just the best mix of dominant and degrading. Tyler is too much latex and hardcore BDSM for me and Marky is just perfection cause hes so dominant but without all the "props" iykwim. Liked Tylers  path too though dont get me wrong just totally fell in love with Marky hehe

Alex, I would also like to help you as a beta reader.  If you still need any, you can reach me on Discord. Same screen name as here.

Thank you! When I have something to show, I'll message you.

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Hii! If you still need beta readers, I wouldn't mind helping! I hope you feel better

thank you! how can I contact you?

the next update will take a little while to happen, but I do want help with beta reading.

Hii! sorry for the delay, you can a discord server or something like that? I can enter via this or, if you prefer, you have Tumblr? I can talk to you in this way too

Hey! You can find me in this Discord Server. There's a channel for my game. From there you can find me and message me privately.

https://discord.gg/pmxSKKPf

Thanks!

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Yay a new update! (/◕ヮ◕)/ I played this game like a month ago and I loved it but then I checked that it hadn’t been updated in a while and thought it was abandoned(T▽T).So glad it’s not!I can’t wait to see more! :>

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My health sometimes forces me to not work on this for months at a time. But I'm happy that I was able to deliver this update.

Thank s for reading!

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glad to see another update ! hope you're feeling better now .

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Thanks! I've been feeling better overall.

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really nice update ! I can't wait to see the rest of the game, now that we have all the characters !
Also, was nice in the beginning to have all the different mornings depending on what branch you were on.
Wishing you the best !

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Thank you!

Doing the branches was really tough. I'm glad people are playing different paths so they can see all the different versions of the story!

Hi, I'm wondering if there's a way to make the Avatars larger? I'm afraid I'm having difficulty distinguishing them while reading. Which is a pity since they look great.

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I love my avatars, but if I make them bigger, the text will be super squished on mobile, I think. I'll try to see if I can enhance a few pixels.

I picked different colored boxes to help distinguish characters during gameplay. Don't them help you?

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Hi, I really loved the game and was wondering if the ummm romance point system? has any influence on the story, thanks.

Great job on the writing, definitely one of the better games on here, wish one day I can play this game through the final chapter. (Do what you want tho Im not even paying to play this game)

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BTW Marky has me dead, who doesn't like a dom, hunky, sorta yandere/tsundere childhood bestfriend (obsessive bully version) trope

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The point system hasn't really influenced gameplay so far. It will, though. 

Until now I have been busy introducing the world and characters. The next update will introduce the last main character.

After that, the points you accumulated will be used to figure out where to go from there and what choices are available. (If you're too submissive, you can't pick option X. If Marky has less than Y points, you can't choose him... etc.)

I want to give leeway to readers in the first few chapters to test the waters and have fun with different characters, before solidifying their choices.

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Is this still being continued?

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It is! But it's very hard and painful for the dev to write cause of his health issues. You can see him talk about it in discord!

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I am currently writing the next update. I'm about 25% done. Unfortunately I cannot give a precise date for when it will be done but I am working on it, I promise.

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this is soooo beautiful thank you very much!! Both routes are super hot.

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Thanks for reading!

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I feel like you read my mind creating this game. Being used by a bunch of powerful men is right up my alley. It is so hot, and so well written. I'm not a fan of the amount of homophobia in it. I understand it's part of the story, but it's pretty jarring in an otherwise riveting read. I can't wait to read more...this game is really keeping me up at night.

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I get that the homophobia might be upsetting to some but it is part of the kink. Being mistreated in all forms, including homophobic language abuse. I'm sorry to hear it bothers you.

I'm writing the next update, but can't give a date yet.

Thanks Alex, I still love reading it, and will obediently wait for more of your wonderful words. They are quite stimulating.

How do people make these text-based games?

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if you mean what program do they use, a lot of them use Twine :)

This is made using Twine / Sugarcube

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Hi Dev! Thanks so much for making this game! I mean it...

I really can't think anything to say more than generic stuff, but they are really genuine... You're the best for making this game...

Please, let me make another comment in the future with some really decent and original compliments... It's the least you deserve for all you have done in this game...

Also, talking about the public release, what path can I take to get the roughest scenes? I really like to obey them, but I also like to be very rude and rude to myself... Why can I have both? Haha...

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Aw, thank you for the compliments! And sorry for the answering delay.

Also, the roughest scenes right now aren't the best for future gameplay. As in, getting them upset at you isn't the best for the main character in building a relationship with those guys.

If you act like a bitch, you'll be treated like a bitch, but they won't like you anymore lol so yeah, I get what you mean.

[SPOILER]

The roughest scenes are all in Chapter IV:

- throwing Marky off when he climbs atop you during his path;

- hugging Tyler in the shower also during his path;

- there's a rough game over scene if you put on your dirty clothes right after going to Tyler's room.

anyone know how to get the "true end?"

Hey, so, there's no "true end" yet since the story is not over.

If you're talking about Tyler's"true path" on chapter IV, it's:


(SPOILER ALERT)

Escape and beg Tyler

Get up and follow

Put on Latex

Start Posing (pick only the Pink poses)

Yes, desperately want

How long 

Stop sucking and look up

Tyler approaches

Restrain

Yes (but he won't hold it against you if you leave the tub, I know watersports is not for everyone)

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So late Feb for the update still seem right?
And ngl this is so hot and well written like damn.

Also wanted to point out: while works like a charm on my ipad, shows fatal error on my laptop and phone (android).

thanks for the compliment!

late feb doesn't seem right anymore. I'm currently avoiding technology because of my health thing. probably mid march if I get better in two weeks or so.

as for the error, I've noticed that happens on private tabs or browsers with disabled cookies. make sure cookies are properly enabled.

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How deep does your intentions for the kink scenes go if you don't mind my asking? I really enjoy a huge spectrum of the kink world so I am just wanting to know how far you are willing to take it?

Can you be a bit more specific? I am not sure exactly what you're asking so I'll just talk about it broadly.

I plan to add some kinks and delve further into kinks I've already introduced. 

The main kink of the game is humiliation and all kinks are permeated and introduced through that particular prism. 

Off the top of my head, I plan to add: sex toys (specifically buttplugs but probably dildos), body worshipping, sweat, armpit, spitting, bondage. Also, some more aggressive kinks, like spanking, choking and some fighting as well. I'm sure I'm forgetting a bunch of stuff.

I'm not some sort of BDSM expert, so it won't be a realistic take on it (aftercare will not be a part of it, for instance, maybe a bit with Haruki, because he's the "nice one".)

Does that answer your question?

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It answered my questions thank you. It took me a while but I saw the watersports kink with Tyler, and I personally would love to see that go a further level of degredation/humiliation ie making the character drink down. Perhaps adding it in to the options for others as well. But really whatever you decide is gonna be great, I can already tell just from what you have already. Thanks for taking the time to respond.

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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

There will be piss drinking in the future, but I will build up to it. MC is a virgin. It would feel like too much for him to swallow in his first experience with watersports.

That's definitely fair. Thanks again.

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Love the game, any news about the next update

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Thanks! It usually takes me a while to finish an update. Next one will probably be late February.

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take as much time as u want, this is really fascinating and can't wait to see what's next

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This game is fucking hot! Like, I am usually not into degradation and stuff, but this game is making me change my mind

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glad to be bringing one more person to the dark side. welcome! we have cookies chains and stuff.

cool and all but i'm still laughing over calling the urethra a "piss slit".

was there some sort of censoring going on here? lol

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English is not my first language. I've seen that expression in other works and I assumed it was normally used in the english speaking world. 

Also, I don't think urethra is a word Marky would say (or know the meaning of; he kinda dumb).

you're right, i can't imagine Marky saying that, dude is too focused on torturing Alex to even be focusing on his studies.

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'Piss slit' is a common enough term in Britain, at least. 'Urethra' is quite technical and rarely used in common, non-medical, conversation.

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heeheheheh i really really enjoy this and its kinda funny ngl or its prob me who cant take sexual scene seriously lmao

when mark force u to change i thought he's gonna force a maid costume on u 

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I'm glad you like it, even if you find the sex scenes funny (there are some jokes peppered here and there, but it's not a funny game overall). What matters is that you enjoyed it lol

And a maid costume would be too sissy for my taste. I'm not a fan, so no sissyfication in my game.

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well it's a great game i could say a diamond in the rough so compliment to the chef.

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Really enjoyed Marky's route so far as a sub degradee x///x 

He's an asshole and I hate love him

The story's so good-

I drew a quick lil somethin', somethin' cuz' I'm a loser 

hope to see more updates, you da man [-• < -] /

Marky, Bruh
I'm a loser for drawing this but I still hope it does him justice
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OMG I wish I could like this a thousand times. I love it! You for sure did him justice, I love the style and horns and bloody Y and everything. Thanks for sharing the drawing. You really made my day!

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