Really?? It looks great!
Hawkwardegal
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Hello, it sounds really interesting, but I can't play it. After opening up the html file, it says, "Failed to download file Build/New folder.data.br. Loading web pages via a file:// URL without a web server is not supported by this browser. Please use a local development web server to host Unity content, or use the Unity Build and Run option."
I don't know if this is a mistake or a matter of messed up formatting but, in English, when speakers change it is supposed to start a new paragraph. For instance:
"Do you need to go to the ER?"
"No, I'm good," the woman says, looking out the window.
Edit: Because I apparently wasn't clear enough, my constructive criticism is that this is not done. In my browser, in my playthroughs, this spacing does not appear so that there's two speakers in one paragraph on a consistent basis. Between this and the dark background with red font color, the game is rendered unplayable and gives me migraines.
I can't believe that you created such quality in a month! Seriously, I'm amazed!
I really enjoyed this, especially all the combinations in the story. The only downside for me were the grammatical errors, but those were easily dismissed. Thank you for making this.
I'm planning on buying 'Fate of the Squire'; I can't wait to see what you can do without a time limit in full length game!
