Launch errors won't have anything to do with your operating system. It sounds it's an issue with your browser or with a browser extension. Many privacy browser extensions (UBlock Origin, Privacy Badger, etc) will cause Twine games to fail to launch. You also cannot run the game if you're in incognito mode.
I would try running the game in a different browser first and see if you have the same issues. Check out this post here for common launch issues and try out some of the solutions--hopefully something there will help!
