I just realised something about My New Family that seems odd now I think of it: nobody seems to get mildly ill at all . Ida strained her back a little, Melissa has a scar, and MC got knocked out by an enthusiastic Maddy... and that's it. Does everyone have enough vitamins or something?
I think it'd be a good plot point if the MC got ... food poisoning, let's say, that knocked him out bad enough to need a hospital. While he's out of it, all his ladies rally round and, in some cases, meet for the first time. I know it's being told from the MC's point of view, but it'd be a nice change of pace to see things going on from Lucy's POV - or Fiona.
Anyhow, it's not my story to tell, and I'm enjoying your output immensely in any case. As you were. ;-)