God it's a shame the game isn't complete, because this is BEAUTIFUL! I really see a lot of potential with this, both for the premise and the cute as hell art style.
The movement controls weren't the best choice, if it's an exploration kind of game you need movement to be as smooth and easy to do as possible, and yea, clicking isn't a great option.
In the intro, the narration text was way too dark to read properly, please make it a bit lighter!
And yea, you definitely have something here. Just need to put some more work into it. Good job so far!