Congrats! I like how the couples care for each other. The writing is very effective.
I want to share a song that comes to my mind when I rethink about the story over and over.
//儚くたゆたう 世界を 君の手で 守ったから
今はただ 翼をたたんで ゆっくり 眠りなさい
永遠の 安らぎに つつまれて love through all eternity
You defended this fragile and fleeting world with your hands
So please, fold your wings and rest
Sheltered by an eternal peace, love through all eternity/