Wow, that was an amazing review. Thank you!
I will admit, you are totally right about the blood writing. It doesn't feel 'photographic' and therefore doesn't fit in with aesthetic. That is a really good point.
My default defence is "it's a game jam visual novel" :D And when I released it I was pretty done with it. But this has been generally much better received than I thought it would be and that's kinda inspiring me to consider polishing it up.
But anyways, thanks so much for playing / reviewing / recording / sharing, very very much appreciated!