If it's one thing I like it's nerd girls who make games :) (call me). Anyway, I want to point out to others that this is an experience and should be reviewed as such and done so fairly. Keep criticism constructive because we want to build up indie devs and not tear them down. With that said as an experience the environment looks good. Adding sound and music will help. Where you go from here depends on what you want the player/viewer to feel. But you have a descent start on which to build. I did make a video but for some reason the framerate and audio are buggy so I am not uploading it.