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First, Thank you for the reply, and your game and creation. What follows is just my opinion.

I can see why possibly some mc's would want to help Lin, Jin, Maria, Nia, Robot, etc on their quests... If this book wasn't this book. However:

On top of all the things you did to the girls in say the 'early days' of the hotel; to coercing the church girl into performing extremely public cum walks in front of her sister; to keeping the twin sisters as a bj alarm; to keeping the 4 elf sex slaves I own (Nia, Sylvie, Peni, Ann) kept locked in the shed on low quality food rations; to all the other brainwashing I do around the house and all of the crazy shit there is to do in the dungeon. I'd say there is a pretty huge gap between 'helping' some of the girls and destroying others.

Honestly I play for the later part of the game I mentioned, and I'm not really looking for my mc to have any redemption. I would way rather bro-down and have another contest with Cornwall with a new batch of his girls; or turn the bar into a breastaurant with exhibition and submission points to work for me; or kali create a startup company with more robot models and different attachments; or have the college open up a sorority in my hotel. The last thing I want to do is go on a long, futile, and counter-to-my-interests dailog quest to liberate any of the girls in the harem.

Whatever though, it's your game, you know the arcs and how long you want to continue to work on the game and all that. For me the game/vn as a whole is great 10/10; its just the last 2-3 updates I end up not reading and skipping long-winded content, which unlike the core game (<v11), doesn't have any payoff.

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Opinions are fine, but to clear some things up, Autumn was not coerced into performing exhibitionism, it was actually a story point that she wanted to do it again, and the elves aren't locked in a shed with poor quality food. There is also no brainwashing going on, and being into BDSM doesn't mean you can't want to love or want to help that person. It's just a fetish.

You seem to be ignoring the story in favor of sexual content. Sexual content isn't going anywhere of course, and I will continue to add higher quality scenes. But... there is a story to this game as well, and that's the meat of this game.

One thing that confuses me most though, is that v0.14 has included more sexual content than most updates that have come before. There are a few sex scenes added in the story this update as well. I aim to include 1 sex scene per 3 story scenes. Is your complaint more so that the amount of story dialogue has increased a lot, but the sex has not? It's true that story events have been getting bigger and longer, but this is also why I've been adding a lot to the repeatable content, such as with lust content.

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I guess to your first paragraph, maybe it is up to reader interpretation - for me it leans heavily towards coercion and brainwashing of the girls. The girls in the sanctuary you have literal ownership over - and your only real interactions with them is that they unwillingly have to give sexual services (ok, two are more accepting of it as they have ever only known sexual slavery) . If that’s not sexual slavery, I don’t know what is - I guess I’m not sure why now you’re sugar coating the relationships you have with the girls. Anyway- it’s your prerogative. 

To your last paragraph, I guess you are right, I would say my complaint would be that the update story is getting too long and disproportionate to the sex scenes. For me it’s a sex game and I’d keep coming back for that content, but if it moves towards 3-1, I’ll lose interest. In future updates. Last update I had to skip through the whole boat and elf island scene, the wedding scene, etc. so it seems like wasted effort when I’d rather just have 5 new girls or elf’s to corrupt. 

Again, it’s your story and your game - so you do you. I’m appreciative for all you’ve done, and your listening to this feedback. You’re a great dev!

Yeah, this is an adult visual novel, so you can expect more story than sex. But 1 sex event for every 3 story events within the story has always been the plan. Hasn't changed.