the weirdness is the grammar thing i mentioned. they are one and the same.
I'll do my best to document everything but im currently playing through a different VN ... but i just noticed this game has an update :)
i'd almost be tempted to help out as well with the programming but i'm not exactly knowledgeable in the ren'py engine nor do i really fancy the syntax (Python style ,i prefer C style) but hope you enjoy yourself doing all that typing.