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Well, I can say that it's definitely an interesting idea to make into a game. I would say that you kinda switched between text and voice acting during the demo. I hope you can settle on either text or voice acting. Beyond that, speed up the door opening/closing animation and tone the 'I will kill you' and static volume down a bit .