That is great you're trying a visual novel. It just means you'll learn much more about writing and storytelling. Writing is actually super challenging. Grammar and spelling mistakes are so important to steer away from, having a dictionary by your side can be good, or Google words you're unsure of. Mistakes improve when working on them.:)
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thank Alexanda :) yes writing is quite challenging indeed , knowing correct spelling for words is one thing but being able to write down a story is another thing.. i'm not sure i can get better on storytelling , time will tell :) and yes i always have a english dictionnary near me if there are words i don't know about or forget words..which happen sometimes :D google can help about that too. somewhow using rpg maker helped me a little to understand the base of renpy but i need to learn it better yet too :)
i do not have yet everything about characters i will use on that visual novel ,i'm not in a hurry either just like Yumi's Dream it takes time to think everything through and music and things
i just hope i will be able to complete it with time, no idea which one between Yumi's Dream or this visual novel will be finished first :)